Exceptional use of expressions, pauses, animations, and all of the other effects you put into it. The antics of the characters are really believable. The only real issue I'd say would be the pronunciation of some of the words by the computer, which make them difficult to decipher. Consider purposely misspelling words in the script to better mimic the actual sounds of the words. Example: 'I' instead of 'eye', (which might be miscontrued as 'eh why eh' under certain conditions. Also, it's unclear as to what the outcome of the story is, because I'm not really sure if it's the first of an installment or a single video just from having watched it. Overall though, really good work. Good use of animation.
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Exceptional use of expressions, pauses, animations, and all of the other effects you put into it. The antics of the characters are really believable. The only real issue I'd say would be the pronunciation of some of the words by the computer, which make them difficult to decipher. Consider purposely misspelling words in the script to better mimic the actual sounds of the words. Example: 'I' instead of 'eye', (which might be miscontrued as 'eh why eh' under certain conditions. Also, it's unclear as to what the outcome of the story is, because I'm not really sure if it's the first of an installment or a single video just from having watched it. Overall though, really good work. Good use of animation.
I really liked your xtramormal video it was funny and well scripted.
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