The background music was one of the most impressive things, because it was unexpected and highly relevant. The front slide was attractive and relevant, and the script itself is well written if you ask me. As with the interview, you have a good sense of audacity. No background noise was evident. Again, maybe try increasing the volume of the audio originally to increase the audibility of the video. The length was good though. It was lengthy enough to be informative, and yet brief enough to maintain the audience's interest. Maybe you could have shown different pictures of shoes during the course of the video to make the video itself more engaging. Overall though this was the best assignment yet.
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The background music was one of the most impressive things, because it was unexpected and highly relevant. The front slide was attractive and relevant, and the script itself is well written if you ask me. As with the interview, you have a good sense of audacity. No background noise was evident. Again, maybe try increasing the volume of the audio originally to increase the audibility of the video. The length was good though. It was lengthy enough to be informative, and yet brief enough to maintain the audience's interest. Maybe you could have shown different pictures of shoes during the course of the video to make the video itself more engaging. Overall though this was the best assignment yet.
I liked your Radio Commercial it sounded like a real one and it was also funny.
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